Using the Pointed Reading Strategy with SWBS to Reach Reluctant Readers (Kylene Beers)

“First, there is no one answer to understanding why an adolescent struggles with reading.  For there to be only one answer, there would have to be only one cause, and for there to be one cause, all students would have to be alike, learn alike, have had the same experiences.  Instead, there is no single template for the struggling reader.  Second, while there is no single answer, there are answers.  My chant of ‘These kids can’t read,’ wasn’t the wrong chant—they couldn’t read.  What was wrong was using that as an excuse for not teaching them.  Once I was willing to add the question, ‘They can’t read, so what am I to do?’ then answers—not one, but many—began to emerge.”  Dr. Kylene Beers, When Kids Can’t Read, What Teachers Can Do:  A Guide for Teachers 6-12 (2002, p. 7).

I first heard Kylene Beers speak in 2004.  I was in the first year of my teacher education program and we were encouraged to attend the Language Arts conference Reading For the Love of It here in Toronto (aside: if you are from the Toronto area or are anywhere near Toronto during the month of February, you MUST attend this conference!  The entire event is phenomenal and I have learned so much over the years).  My friend and I were looking over the various presentations and one of them immediately caught our attention—”Reaching Reluctant Readers.”  We sat there for the next hour completely mesmerized by Kylene Beers*.  She was phenomenal.  She was inspirational.  And she knew what she was talking about.

During her presentation, she went through various strategies to use with reluctant readers; however, I found the following activity very powerful and I have used it with my students very often.  It involves two strategies:  pointed reading and a SWBS chart.

What is pointed reading?

Pointed reading is a three step process:

1. The teacher reads the selected text (I’ve always used a poem, but I’m sure this could work with other texts as well) aloud, while students follow along on their own copy.

2. The teacher re-reads the text aloud, but this time students underline about 5 words or phrases that they like, are meaningful, or just stand out to them for some reason.

3. The teacher re-reads the text aloud, but  now students join in at the parts they have underlined.

The effect of this pointed reading activity is astounding, as there is an ebb and flow of voices throughout the third reading of the poem.  Students will notice that at some points the poem is loud, as many voices have joined in on the reading, and these places usually signify the main idea or message of the text.  I’ve used this strategy so many times and it has never failed to pinpoint the key parts of a poem where the theme is predominant.

Here’s a document that provides the activity in more detail: http://www.asdk12.org/MiddleLink/LA/tips/PDF/18_Pointed_Reading.pdf

But there’s more!

I’m sure many of you have heard of the Somebody Wanted But So (SWBS) framework.  If not, here’s a brief description.

After pointed reading, fill in the SWBS chart with your students.  Once the chart is completed, the teacher can use the following prompts to help students apply the elements of a story to the SWBS chart:

  • What do we call the people in a story/poem? (character)
  • What part of the story tells you what motivates a character or what the character wants? (plot)
  • What do we call the part of the story that deals with a problem the character is facing? (conflict)
  • What do we call the solution or lack of solution to a problem? (resolution)

Here’s an example using the Langston Hughes poem “Mother to Son”:

Well, son, I’ll tell you:
Life for me ain’t been no crystal stair.
It’s had tacks in it,
And splinters,
And boards torn up,
And places with no carpet on the floor –
Bare.
But all the time
I’se been a-climbin’ on,
And reachin’ landin’s,
And turnin’ corners,
And sometimes goin’ in the dark
Where there ain’t been no light.
So boy, don’t you turn back.
Don’t you set down on the steps
‘Cause you finds it’s kinder hard.
Don’t you fall now –
For I’se still goin’, honey,
I’se still climbin’,
And life for me ain’t been no crystal stair.

Ask students to summarize the SWBS chart into one general statement.  For the above example, it may be something like:  People may encounter obstacles or challenges in life, but they need to persevere in order to succeed.  This general statement then becomes the THEME of the text!

One of the greatest things about the SWBS chart and the pointed reading activity is that the loudest part of the poem (where the majority of the class has joined in to read the section of the poem aloud) relates directly to the theme.  Students really get this activity and enjoy it!  It makes understanding poetry (as well as other texts) much easier!

* Kylene Beers is the author of the phenomenal book When Kids Can’t Read, What Teachers Can Do:  A Guide for Teachers. 6-12 (Heinemann, 2002), for which I will be providing a resource review soon!  You must get this resource!  It is excellent!

Somebody Wanted But So (SWBS) Strategy

This is actually the second post in a two part post that I just finished writing.  So why am I posting part 2 first?  Well, when I began writing a post on a fantastic reading comprehension activity that I first heard about at the Language Arts conference, Reading for the Love of It, I began to outline the two part activity.  The first part of the activity used a pointed reading strategy, while the second part took students through a SWBS chart, but then I started to think, “What if the reader hasn’t used a SWBS chart before?” So I began to explain SWBS, but then decided to just create a separate post to explain it.

Somebody Wanted But So  (SWBS) was originally introduced by MacOn, Bewell, and Vogt in their 1991 booklet Responses to Literature in order to help students understand the elements of a story.  Now, let’s consider a story that we’re familiar with:   Snow White.  The evil queen wants to be the fairest in all the land, but the magic mirror proclaims Snow White, her step-daughter, as the fairest of all.  The Queen flies into a rage and orders a huntsman to take Snow White into the woods to kill her, but the huntsman has a change of heart and allows Snow White to run away into the woods.

Let’s place this story snippet into a SWBS chart.  How do we do this?

  • choose a character mentioned
  • what does the character want/need or what is the character’s goal?
  • what is the problem that the character faces?
  • what is the solution to the problem or does the character reach the goal?

Want to see something cool?

Somebody = Character

Wanted = Plot

But = Conflict

So = Resolution

The SWBS chart helps to identify the elements of a story!  Students can easily come to this conclusion with some guided questioning on the part of the teacher e.g. what do we call a problem in a story?

Next, ask students to generalize each of the statements so that it is not so specific to the story; for example:

This generalized statement now becomes, wait for it, the THEME!

I love SWBS and this works for all types of texts…poems, novel chapters, short stories, non-fiction…you can even use it to record historical and scientific events and discoveries!

Here’s a handout to use with your class!  Have students fill in the elements of a story (character, plot, conflict, resolution, and theme) into each set of brackets, respectively.  Just click on the image below!

Our time is coming to an end!

What better way to end the year then with a timeline reflection – have your students reflect on the great school year! You can do this in so many different ways and for so many different reasons. Click on the attachment to read more about timelines!

 

Mathematics Learning Logs

We know as teachers that students are successful when they can synthesize what they have learned and what they are having problems with based on a certain criteria. Giving students the opportunity to record what “I now know” and what “I need to learn” in relation to a lesson goal will promote them to become reflective thinkers and learners. I find that using learning logs at the end of a lesson is a fantastic way for students to critically analyze their own personal learning. I create little booklets for my students for each strand of mathematics.

Click on this link Math Learning Logs to view the whole file.

 

Resource Review: “The Leader in Me” by Stephen R. Covey (2008)

“Leadership is communicating people’s worth and potential so clearly that they are inspired to see it in themselves” (The Leader in Me: How Schools and Parents Around the World are Inspiring Greatness, One Child at a Time (2008), Stephen R. Covey, p. 41).

Why is leadership in schools so important?  Before you answer, I’m referring to students as leaders in a school, not just the administrators and teachers.  Although it is necessary for administrators and teachers to take on a positive leadership role within the school, it is essential that students develop their own leadership skills and use these skills to make a positive impact on the school climate.

Stephen R. Covey is famous for “The 7 Habits of Highly Effective People,” which have been incorporated into developing the leadership skills of students across the world.  Why are schools looking to develop leadership skills in their students?  According to Covey (2008, p. 4) explains that student leadership:

  • improved student achievement
  • significantly enhanced self-confidence and esteem in students
  • dramatic decreases in discipline problems
  • impressive increases in teachers’ and administrators’ job satisfaction and commitment
  • greatly improved school cultures
  • parents who are delighted and engaged in the process
  • business and community leaders who want to lend support

“The Leader in Me” tells the story of several schools that have incorporated student leadership into their daily curriculum and strived to make every student a leader.  One such school is A.B. Combs Elementary School in Raleigh, North Carolina that underwent a dramatic transformation after incorporating “The 7 Habits of Highly Effective People,” along with some other leading practices.  The book takes you through the issues A.B. Combs Elementary began with and how they underwent a carefully planned metamorphosis into a culture of leadership.  Their story is both inspirational and attainable, as Covey takes the reader through the entire process and helps one understand the rational behind each step and how it can be adapted and applied to one’s own school community.

How can you begin to think about student leadership for your school?  As Covey explains, you must think of the various stakeholders (parents, business community, teachers, and students) want from a school and begin from there.  Right now, we have five committees for our grade 7 and 8 students, in order to help them develop leadership skills while assisting the school community, but I would like to work on our strategies and evolve our model, so I will be further researching this topic and its application.  Check out http://www.theleaderinme.org/ for more ideas on how to get started.

How do you develop the leadership skills of your students?  What opportunities are they given to showcase their skills and use them for the betterment of the school community?

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